Defeat Writing Obstacles

Resist the Enemy and He Will Flee—James 4:7

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Have you ever felt that no matter how hard you work, your efforts seem blocked at every turn? The harder you try, the more frustration and failure you face, leaving you wondering if there’s something deeper at play.Defeat your writing obstacles with the insight and strategies needed to overcome challenges and move forward with purpose.

When our work, finances, or progress feel hindered in ways that defy logic, it’s often a sign of spiritual opposition. Sniper fire—or perhaps machine gun fire—keeps us pinned down so we cannot see the larger landscape. Often, the solution is not to charge out of our foxhole and directly into enemy gunfire but to disrupt the enemy’s flanks. By acting in ways he doesn’t expect, we shift the battle to a different sector and draw his forces away from our front.

Look, the devil is not omnipresent. Neither are his fallen angels. There are a limited number of demons. How many, no one can say, but we know that only a third fell from heaven. That means the devil’s forces are outgunned two-to-one. Best of all, Jesus has already defeated the devil. The victory is already ours. So let’s be smart about how we engage. Start with attacks that hit the enemy where it hurts.

Radical Generosity Helps Defeat Your Writing Obstacles

If your work or finances are under attack, bless others with what you have. This could mean giving away resources, helping someone in need, or supporting a ministry. Generosity counters the devil’s attempts to keep you focused on lack and discouragement. It shifts your expectation of provision to God’s abundance and faithfulness.

Worship and Praise Defeats Writing Obstacles

Worship disrupts the enemy’s propaganda machine. Declaring God’s sovereignty and power silences the enemy’s lies, which are fueled by doubt and darkness. There’s a reason teams cheer, armies advancing shout, and crowds scream for victory. Spoken words project the outcome we expect. Our words carry life and death, so praise the Lord with boldness. Thank Him for small blessings and for disasters that didn’t happen. There’s always another reason to thank God. Find it and declare it aloud. This takes your focus off present struggles and refocuses it on the reality of God’s victory.

Invest in Someone Else’s Success Defeats Writing Obstacles for You and Others

If your efforts seem fruitless, sow time, energy, or encouragement into someone else. Helping others succeed frustrates the enemy’s attempts to isolate you or keep you self-focused. When you help a brother or sister advance, you move the line forward, and that’s the point of an advance.

Forgiveness and Reconciliation Always Defeats Writing Obstacles

If your writing success feels out of reach, take a closer look at your relationships for any unresolved conflicts. Conflict within the ranks hinders progress. Extend forgiveness, even if you didn’t cause the problem. Be the first to “make it right.” Repairing relationships thwarts the enemy’s attempts to divide and conquer.

Intercessory Prayer? You Secret to Defeating Writing Obstacles

Rather than focusing only on your struggles and lack of writing success, pray fervently for others. Everyone is facing battles, whether seen or unseen. Keep a list, pray their names, and learn about their circumstances so you can pray with purpose. Standing in the gap for others brings joy, peace, and rest into their lives, which the enemy despises. Want to frustrate the enemy? Make him complain about your prayers.

Spiritual Acts of Service Defeat the Enemies of Your Writing

Volunteer in areas unrelated to your struggles and writing. The enemy won’t expect you to show up in another place. Sometimes, your greatest success will come from stepping just a few feet down the line.

Declare God’s Promises Over Your Writing

Speak Scripture over your challenges—especially writing challenges. If the enemy brought the problem, respond with God’s Word and send him running. Focusing on God’s unchanging promises enlarges your view of His power and diminishes your fear. Speak victory over your situation because the enemy cannot withstand the truth of God’s Word.

Celebrate Small Victories In Your Writing

If the enemy targets your progress, praise God for even the smallest victories. The enemy’s goal is destruction, so staying alive is a win. Celebrating undermines his attempts to discourage you.

Writing IS Outreach and Evangelism

Share your testimony or the reason for your hope in Christ. Spiritual warfare intensifies when you bring others closer to God. Evangelism shifts the battle into enemy territory.

Take a Sabbath Rest From Your Writing

Resting in God’s presence is a powerful act of trust. If the enemy is attacking your work, stepping back in faith signals your confidence in God’s ability to fight for you. God has all the time in the world to solve your problems, so use some of His and rest.

How This Defeats the Enemy

These actions shift the focus from your struggles to God’s kingdom priorities. The enemy expects a head-on fight in your area of difficulty. Instead, by attacking his plans through worship, generosity, or helping others, you disrupt his strategy. This aligns with Matthew 6:33: “Seek first His kingdom and His righteousness, and all these things will be given to you as well.”

By engaging in actions that reflect God’s heart, you shift the spiritual battle to a place where the enemy is unprepared, operating in the fullness of God’s power.

How to Win Over the Acquiring Editor

From Passive to Active Voice—Reality Coaching for Writers

Down to Davy Jones—How to Win Over the Acquiring EditorMain Theme: The podcast episode “How to Win Over the Acquiring Editor” focuses on the importance of using active voice instead of passive voice in writing, both in fiction and non-fiction. It explains why passive voice is detrimental to engagement and offers practical advice on identifying and correcting it.

Key Ideas & Facts for How to Win Over the Acquiring Editor:

  1. The “Green Smiley” Metaphor: The podcast uses a visual metaphor of “green smileys” to represent good writing, specifically writing that avoids passive voice. Websites and search engines often flag passive writing with “red,” “orange,” or “neutral” (not green) indicators, highlighting the importance of this issue for writers who care about online reach.
  2. Defining Passive Voice: The hosts explain that passive voice occurs when the subject of a sentence receives the action, rather than performing it. Examples include:
  • “The room was cleaned.” (Who cleaned it?)
  • “The flowers were cut.” (Who cut them?)
  • “The lights were turned on.” (Who turned them on?)
  • Quote: “when you don’t have a attached person to the action where there’s anonymity where there’s well who cleaned the room… you don’t want to just slap on a Band-Aid you want to you want the sentences to uh bring something to the story.”
  1. The Problem with Passive Voice: Passive voice creates a sense of distance and anonymity, and ultimately reduces engagement. It leads to:
  • Lack of Character Agency: When actions are passive, characters feel like they’re being acted upon instead of driving the plot.
  • Loss of Reader Interest: Passive voice can bore the reader, slowing down pacing and failing to create emotional connection with characters and/or situations
  • Lack of Emotional Depth: The writer fails to convey the character’s thoughts or feelings, which can also fail to move the story forward
  • Lack of Confidence: In non-fiction, passive voice undermines the writer’s authority by making them appear unsure of their statements.
  • Quote: “when you’re writing in a passive voice you are allowing someone else to drive the action that’s kind of the bottom line of what this is”
  • Quote: “if you don’t care the reader’s not going to care about Maria either she’s just a prop prop in the story”
  1. Moving to Active Voice: To fix passive sentences, the writer needs to clearly identify the person or thing performing the action and make that the subject of the sentence.
  • Passive Example: “The room was cleaned by Maria.”
  • Active Example: “Maria bustled around the room, huffing as she cleaned.”
  • Quote: “Maria bustled around the room huffing as she cleaned it you know well we’re getting some emotion something about Maria we’re it’s it’s oh she’s she’s bustling around huffing she’s upset about something you know it gives us a clue and it’s like you said Eddie it moves the story forward”
  1. Blackbeard the Pirate and Stede Bonnet's Fateful Clash—How to Win Over the Acquiring EditorPacing and Story Movement: Active voice contributes to better pacing and moves the story forward. Avoiding unnecessary details, like long descriptions of travel, keeps the reader engaged. The source points out that readers want to get to the main, exciting parts of the story and may give up on a piece of writing if it lags unnecessarily.
  • Quote: “you never tell anybody how to get from point A to point B unless there’s a a unique way to get from point A to point B that nobody’s ever done before and they need to know it”
  1. Passive Voice in First Drafts: Passive voice often appears in first drafts, as writers are exploring the story. Recognizing this, they must edit these sentences out in subsequent drafts. The need to ‘kill your darlings’ is emphasized.
  • Quote: “in the second draft you’ve got to cut it and I think beginning writers they they’re afraid to cut things and and they fall in love with their words”
  1. Dead Calm, Bone Dry —How to Win Over the Acquiring EditorIdentifying Passive Sentences: The hosts provide practical tips for identifying passive voice:
  • Look for sentences where there is no clear subject performing the action.
  • Identify and replace words like “was,” “were,” “would,” “could,” “have,” and “has.”
  • Use technology, such as chatGPT, to help identify and rewrite passive sentences (though they clarify the technology tends to default to passive, requiring the writer to still ask for it in active).
  • Quote: “look for sentences that belong to no one no person… look for words like would was was W first thing I I just search for was and look for was and figure out a way to just Flip Flip it into an active into an active sentence”
  1. Active Voice = Authority In non-fiction particularly, writing in the active voice signals to readers that you are an authority on the subject, not merely ‘thinking about’ it.

Takeaways for How to Win Over the Acquiring Editor:

  • Active voice is crucial for engaging writing in all genres.
  • Passive voice creates distance, slows pacing, and reduces reader interest.
  • Writers should be proactive in identifying and correcting passive voice in their work.
  • Editing and rewriting, including ‘killing your darlings,’ is necessary to achieve clear, active writing.
  • Writers can use tools like ChatGPT to help rewrite passive sentences.

Conclusion:

This podcast emphasizes the importance of active voice in writing and provides writers with strategies for improving their craft. The use of metaphor and accessible language makes a complex topic easy to understand and apply.

One Writer’s Battle Plan for Success

Operation Overlord—D Day, 2024

This phase of the campaign “Writer’s Battle Plan for Success” is a bold, faith-driven mission. At the initial launch, the 2nd Airborne Company—composed of the parachute infantry regiments Jehovah Jireh and My Father’s Business—will land behind enemy lines

Influence Increase—Behind Enemy Lines—Writer’s Battle Plan for Success:Dead Low Tide—Writer's Battle Plan for Success:

Promise of Increase:  Psalm 115:14 – “The Lord will give you increase more and more.”

. By infiltrating untapped markets, allied audiences, and enemy-held territory, my books will act as spiritual liberators, capturing strategic positions that establish pathways and crossings to connect with new readers and open fresh distribution channels.

As the campaign unfolds, the efforts of the 2nd Airborne will soften resistance from opposing forces, turning doubters about Jesus into believers. Every reader impacted, every connection made, and every door opened will lead to desertions among the enemy’s ranks.

The works of Jehovah Jireh and My Father’s Business are trained to fight fiercely. By engaging readers directly and expanding influence, the 2nd Airborne will keep the enemy occupied while the main portion of Operation Overlord advances.


Strategic Airstrike—Writer’s Battle Plan for Success:Phantom Gunslinger—Writer's Battle Plan for Success:

Promise of Success: Genesis 17:1-9 – “The Lord has established your prosperity.”

This phase of the campaign launches airstrikes guided by prayer, ensuring that every effort—my books, blog posts, Amazon ads, social media entries, and press releases—reaches its target with divine precision. Just as airstrikes begin from land or sea, travel through the air, and land on their intended targets, our prayers ascend to heaven (Psalm 18:10), and God ensures they accomplish His purpose when their answer is manifested (Isaiah 55:11).

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In the same way Isaiah 55:11 declares that when God’s word goes forth, it will accomplish what He desires and achieve the purpose for which He sent it, we trust in faith that through His Word and prayer, every payload will reach its target and fulfill its purpose in readers’ lives.


Border Expansion Expedition—Writer’s Battle Plan for Success:

Promise of Success: Exodus 34:24 – “The Lord will enlarge your borders.”

This phase of the campaign mobilizes a full-scale invasion force to drive the enemy back and establish strategic strongholds within Amazon and other online book shopping sites.


6th Army – Right Flank Assault

The 6th Army, commanded by General Nick Caden, will execute a flanking maneuver on the enemy’s right side.

  • First Battalion, Dead Man’s Hand: Spearheads the assault, engaging enemy forces directly.
  • Second Battalion, Skull Creek Stakeout, and Third Battalion, Dead Low Tide: Follow in the second and third waves, retrieving wounded (returns), and securing ground.
  • Fourth Battalion, Phantom Gunslinger, Fifth Battalion, Mystery of the Eyewitness Ghost, and Sixth Battalion, Rumor of a Werewolf: Held in reserve, ready to deploy to critical areas as needed.

Mystery of the Eyewitness Ghost—Writer's Battle Plan for Success5th Army – Left Flank Assault

The 5th Army, commanded by General Ricky Bradshaw, will simultaneously execute a flanking maneuver on the enemy’s left side. This action, coordinated with the 6th Army’s advance, creates a decisive “pincher” movement, trapping opposition forces in a vice and disrupting their ability to mount an effective defense.

  • 1st Battalion, Curse of the Black Avenger: Leads the charge, launching initial strikes to break through enemy defenses on the left flank.
  • 2nd Battalion, Dead Calm, Bone Dry: Reinforces the assault, solidifying gains and expanding territory.
  • 3rd Battalion, The End of Calico Jack: Advances in the third wave, securing key positions and supporting further penetration into enemy lines.
  • 4th Battalion, Blackbeard the Pirate and Stede Bonnet’s Fateful Clash, and 5th Battalion, Down to Davy Jones: Serve as reserve forces, ready to deploy where resistance is heaviest or to exploit breakthroughs made by the lead battalions.

The 5th Army will execute its campaign in a manner similar to the 6th Army, employing targeted Amazon campaigns, social media outreach, and keyword optimization as its primary tactics. These divisions will infiltrate and disrupt enemy strongholds—books void of God’s Good News and His love, grace, mercy, hope, and faith—creating openings for future advances.


Marine Corps – Frontal Assault

“The Roaring Tides,” 1st Marine Book Division, with support from two additional divisions, will execute a frontal assault.

  • Objective: Keep the enemy preoccupied while the 5th and 6th Armies secure the flanks and disrupt rear operations.
  • Tactics: Launch high-visibility initiatives, such as press releases, blog posts, and short-form video campaigns, to maintain pressure on enemy defenses and draw attention away from the flanking movements.
  • Outcome: Weakening the enemy’s center, allowing flanking forces to execute their mission with greater efficiency.

Campaign Objective—Writer’s Battle Plan for Success:Rumor of a Werewolf—Writer's Battle Plan for Success

Drive the enemy (books that stand in opposition to the hope of Jesus) back across the Maginot Line and secure 9 sales per day per book (9 enemy positions eliminated daily). Utilize Amazon ads, keywords, categories, blog posts, press releases, and social media drops to establish strongholds (sales channels) and capture strategic positions (new readers, market share). Click for a detailed look at the 6th army campaign’s tactical strategy.

Campaign Execution

  • Focus: Declare God’s promises over the campaign, trusting His Word to break barriers and lead to victory. Faith, prayer, and obedience to His leading will give us this territory and increase our influence.
  • Goal: Achieve victory in this campaign by claiming God’s promised increase and victory.

The Lord says, “Never will I leave you; never will I forsake you.” So we say with confidence, “The Lord is my helper; I will not be afraid (Hebrews 13:5-6). If God is for us, who can be against us (Romans 8:31)? We will not be dismayed, for our Lord God is with us. He will strengthen us. He will help us. He will fight for us. He will uphold us with His righteous right hand (Isaiah 41:10).

Declarations of God’s Word for Victory

  1. “I will give you every place where you step foot.” (Joshua 1:3) I declare that as my Lord God was with Joshua, so is He with me.
  2. “I am about to give the enemy to you.” (Joshua 1:3) I declare that the spiritual strongholds opposing this campaign will fall, and victory is already assured by the Lord.
  3. “No one will be able to stand against you.” (Joshua 1:5) I declare that no opposition, resistance, or obstacle will prevail against God’s Word and purpose in this campaign.
  4. “Be strong and courageous. Be careful to follow all the law so that you will be prosperous and successful.” (Joshua 1:8) I declare strength, courage, and faithfulness to God’s commands, trusting that prosperity and success are in His hands.
  5. “The Lord your God gives you rest from this battle. He has granted you this land.” (Joshua 1:13) I declare that the Lord has already secured victory and granted this territory for His glory. I only need to wait and watch Him fight for us.
  6. “Since you have never been this way before, as I, the Lord your God leads, so you will know which way to go.” (Joshua 3:4) I declare that God is leading every step of this campaign, showing the way to pray, write, and manage funds and resources for His purpose.
  7. “The Lord will do amazing things among you.” (Joshua 3:5) I declare that God is working in this campaign to do amazing things that will glorify His name and introduce thousands to Jesus.
  8. “Today I will exalt you in the eyes of your enemies and all.” (Joshua 3:7) I declare that God’s favor is upon this campaign.
  9. “I am with you.” (Joshua 3:7) I declare with confidence that God leads this army.
  10. “The Lord of all the earth will go before you.” (Joshua 3:11) I declare that God gave us the plans for this campaign and is moving ahead, breaking barriers and preparing hearts to receive His message.

Strategic Guide to Achieving Writing Success

Operation Overlord—6th Army Campaign Strategy

Strategic Targets (Action Plan) for Strategic Guide to Achieving Writing Success:

“Strategic Guide to Achieving Writing Success” sets the course for authors to navigate the competitive publishing world with precision and focus. By breaking down actionable steps, this guide equips writers with tools and strategies to optimize their efforts and reach their target audience effectively. Central to this plan is leveraging the power of keywords as bridges, connecting books to the readers actively searching for them.Strategic Guide to Achieving Writing Success

  1. Bridges (Keywords):
    Keywords are the bridges that connect readers searching for books on Amazon.

    • Fixed Goal: Optimize and test 10 high-performing keywords per book campaign weekly.
    • Action Plan:
      • Use tools like Publisher Rocket or Amazon’s auto-suggest to identify niche, long-tail keywords.
      • Example: For Dead Man’s Hand, use keywords like “Christian mystery for teens,” “ghost story YA,” or “middle-grade detective book.”
      • Rotate out underperforming keywords every two weeks to keep campaigns efficient. Click for a tactical report for how to execute this assignment.Writing Success
  2. Crossroads (Amazon Ads):
    Crossroads represent decision points where potential buyers see your ads and click through.

    • Fixed Goal: Achieve a CTR (Click-Through Rate) of at least 0.5% and a cost-per-click (CPC) under $0.29.
    • Action Plan:
      • Run Sponsored Product ads targeting specific genres: “Christian fiction,” “teen mystery,” and “middle-grade adventure.”
      • Group campaigns into small, focused segments (e.g., mystery-themed, ghost-themed keywords for Dead Man’s Hand).
      • Use broad match ads to capture wider visibility but allocate a small budget ($10/month) to these.
  3. Towns (Categories):
    Categories are towns in enemy territory where your books can establish dominance.

    • Fixed Goal: Rank in the top 20 of 2-3 niche categories for each book.
    • Action Plan:
      • Research competitor rankings for categories on Amazon. Use “+” subcategories like “Teen’s Christian Mysteries” or “Teen Paranormal Fiction.”
      • Ensure your books are listed in both popular, primary and secondary niche categories to increase visibility.
      • Use promotional pushes (discounts or Amazon “gift codes” for giveaways) to spike sales and improve ranking.Find success for your book
  4. Railways (Blog Posts & Press Releases):
    Railways are the lines of communication that carry your message to new regions (audiences).

    • Fixed Goal: Publish 2 blog posts per month and release 1 press release per week.
    • Action Plan:
      • Blog about relevant topics such as “How Christian Fiction Inspires Faith in Teens” or “The Role of Mystery in Teaching Life Lessons.”
      • Write press releases highlighting milestones (e.g., awards, new releases) and submit to PRlog.com, Christian and middle-grade reading outlets.
      • Share these posts and releases widely on your social media platforms.
  5. Strongholds (Social Media Drops):
    Strongholds represent reader engagement on social media, where loyalty is built.

    • Fixed Goal: Increase engagement (likes, shares, comments) by 10% monthly.
    • Action Plan:
      • Schedule weekly posts featuring intriguing snippets from your books, themed graphics, or reader polls.
      • Engage directly with followers by asking questions like, “Which Caden Chronicles mystery should Nick tackle next?”
      • Use short-form videos (30 seconds) highlighting key themes or fun facts about the books to appeal to platforms like YouTube, Instagram or TikTok.
  6. Command Centers (Email List & Newsletter):
    Command centers are your direct lines to your most loyal readers.

    • Fixed Goal: Increase email subscribers by 50 per month.
    • Action Plan:
      • Offer a free downloadable short story from the Caden Chronicles as a lead magnet.
      • Send biweekly emails sharing updates, behind-the-scenes content, or exclusive discounts to your subscribers.

Daily Assault Goals (9 Positions Per Day Per Book) for for Strategic Guide to Achieving Writing Success:

  • Dead Man’s Hand:Dead Man's Hand—Strategic Guide to Achieving Writing Success
    3 units through Amazon ads, 2 units through organic searches (keywords/categories), 2 units via blog/social media traffic, and 2 units through email/newsletter subscribers.
  • Skull Creek Stakeout:
    3 units through social media drops, 2 units through Amazon ads, 2 units through word-of-mouth reviews, and 2 units via blog/press outreach.
  • Dead Low Tide:
    3 units through targeted keywords, 2 units via niche categories, 2 units through influencer/book club outreach, and 2 units via your website/email list.

Overarching Strategy—:Skull Creek Stakeout—Strategic Guide to Achieving Writing Success

  1. Budget Allocation:
    Divide your Amazon ads budget among your top-performing campaigns, focusing on books with the highest potential to meet sales goals.
  2. Weekly Monitoring:
    Evaluate ad performance, keyword effectiveness, and category rankings weekly. Shift resources to campaigns showing the strongest ROI.
  3. Milestones:
    Set quarterly goals:

    • Q1: Double daily sales to 4.5 units per book (4-5 positions taken daily).
    • Q2: Hit the target of 9 sales per book per day (9 positions taken daily).

By focusing on these strategic targets and using prayer to guide decisions and dislodge enemy positions, this campaign can break through enemy resistance, capture market share, and secure daily victories on the battlefield of book sales.


“Supply Drop”

Psalm 115:11-16 – “Trusting in the Lord brings blessing and increase.”

Trust in the Lord is my direct line to God’s blessings and the key to success. He has promised to give success to those who fear Him, believe His word, and obey His commands. Through Jesus we have all the promises of Abraham and the strong arm of the Lord that Joshua enjoyed. God ensures every need of ours is met—tools, connections, and creativity—to sustain your mission. Each book I write and release points readers to God’s son, Jesus, offering encouragement and hope, healing and provision.

Trust God to Build Your Platform as a Christian Author—You’re Closer to Success Than You Think!

Reality Coaching for Writers

In this podcast episode, Eddie and Diana explore the spiritual foundation of success for Christian writers. They provide faith-based encouragement and practical insights for authors seeking to build their platforms while honoring God’s purpose for their work.

Key Takeaways:

1. Trust God’s Plan for Your Writing Journey
The hosts emphasize Proverbs 3:5-6 and Jeremiah 29:11, reminding listeners to rely on God for guidance and trust His timing. Success stems from obedience to His calling, not just personal ambition.

2. Consistency and Diligence Pay Off
Drawing from Proverbs 21:5, Eddie and Diana highlight the importance of showing up daily and putting in the work. Persistence, they argue, is key to long-term growth.

3. Embrace Generosity
Based on Proverbs 11:25, they encourage writers to refresh others through positive reviews, mentorship, and celebrating others’ successes. Generosity builds community and enriches personal growth.

4. Prayer and Wisdom
They urge writers to pray for wisdom (James 1:5) and for those who can open doors of opportunity. Worry is not prayer—trust God to provide clarity and direction.

Why Listen?

This episode offers actionable insights and scriptural encouragement for Christian writers striving to align their craft with God’s will.