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Escalating Conflict in Storytelling

Escalating Conflict in Storytelling—1 Thing to Make Your Novel Better

Posted on February 14, 2025July 17, 2025 by Eddie Jones

Conflict in Story

📖 In storytelling, escalating both external and internal conflicts is essential to deepen your lead character’s journey and keep readers engaged. Here are several strategies to intensify conflict in story.

External Conflicts

🔥 Escalating Threats
🔍 Introduce increasingly formidable adversaries or obstacles.
A detective might start with a simple case that unravels into a complex conspiracy, endangering their life and loved ones.

⏳ Compounding Misfortunes
⚠️ Pile up challenges that exacerbate the protagonist’s situation.
Losing a job could lead to financial ruin, straining relationships, and forcing unethical decisions.

⏰ Time Constraints
💣 Impose deadlines that heighten tension.
A character racing against time to defuse a bomb or find a cure for a spreading disease adds urgency and stress.

🌪️ Environmental Hazards
🏔️ Place characters in settings that naturally escalate danger.
Natural disasters, war zones, or hostile terrains force characters to confront external perils.

⚔️ Betrayal by Allies
💔 Have trusted friends or allies turn against the protagonist.
This leads to feelings of isolation and vulnerability.

Internal Conflicts—Conflict in Story

⚖️ Moral Dilemmas
🤔 Confront characters with choices that challenge their ethics.
For example, sacrificing one person to save many leads to intense internal struggle.

😨 Fear and Insecurity
🛑 Exploit the character’s deepest fears or insecurities.
A hero afraid of failure might hesitate at crucial moments, intensifying their internal battle.

🔀 Conflicting Desires—Conflict in Story
💼 Present mutually exclusive goals.
Choosing between career advancement and personal relationships forces tough decisions.

🕰️ Past Trauma
💭 Resurface unresolved issues from the character’s past.
A previous loss or mistake may affect their current decisions and stability.

🌀 Identity Crisis
🔎 Challenge the character’s sense of self.
Unexpected heritage revelations or shifts in personal beliefs lead to profound self-doubt.

By intertwining these escalating external and internal conflicts, you can create a compelling narrative that drives your lead character from bad to worse, maintaining tension and reader investment throughout the story.

✍️ How do you escalate conflict in your stories? Share your thoughts below on Conflict in Story!

 

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Eddie is an award-winning author known for crafting suspenseful mysteries and humorous adventures that captivate readers, young and old.  His books are read by countless inmates and used to introduce others to Christ.

Eddie is the author of The Caribbean Chronicles, a time-travel pirate fantasy adventure series, and The Caden Chronicles, a mystery series based on supernatural myths that he believes have their roots in the Bible. In each case, Nick Caden seeks to debunk the supernatural “myth” and uncover the truth.

Eddie helped launch Christian Devotions Ministries and is its president. He is the former CEO of Lighthouse Publishing of the Carolinas, a Christian book publishing company. He is Executive Editor of Inspireafire.com  and Devokids.com. (If you want to write for IAF, hail this pirate!) He’s also a Writers’ Coach.

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"The Caribbean Chronicles" is a humorous time-travel pirate fantasy adventure series. The third book, "The End of Calico Jack," won first place in the Selah awards for Young Adult literature. Book four, "No Good Stede Goes Unpunished" is a finalist for the Selah awards for Young Adult literature.

The Caden Chronicles middle grade series is wholesome, humorous reading with a flair for unexpected adventure. The series has a spooky but spiritual message based on real "monsters" (sort of) found in Scripture. Hints at werewolves, ghosts, mediums, vampires, walking dead, mummies, demons, witches, and phantoms are all mentioned in the Bible. But are they real? Nick Caden doesn't think so. In each episode he sets out to prove who the real killer is.

All of Eddie's YA and Middle Grade books are available as audiobooks. Eddie calls his novels, "fun, fast reads for boys who don't like to read."
Awards for Middle Grade and YA novels * Winner of the Selah award for tween / teen mysteries * INSPY Award * Moonbeam Children's Book Award

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